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Group 2 1. What has this group done well? Good emotion 2. What, if anything, is confusing about this scene? who is Patrick playing and what is his motive 3. Describe the emotion of the characters/plot. Tense, scared, sad 4. Describe the relationship between the characters. son and dad and a killer 5. What else could this group have done to improve? Project voice louder, make it look like two separate scenes by separating the desk from the son with the killer Group 3 1. What has this group done well? Good emotion 2. What, if anything, is confusing about this scene? nothing 3. Describe the emotion of the characters/plot. anger, confusion, heartbreak 4. Describe the relationship between the characters. in a relationship, breaking up 5. What else could this group have done to improve? more blocking Group 4 1. What has this group done well? good blocking 2. What, if anything, is confusing about this scene? confused about their relationship 3. Describe the emotion of the c...

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Orange background, a large teddy bear and an African American Girl are standing back to back. Growing pains are hard to go through, but are inevitable in life and help shape who you are as a person.

I would get rid of "light tiny" when it says "light tiny castle because a castle isn't light or small Shades of blue instead of "shadows of blue" Use a semicolon instead of "-" in both paragraphs Get rid of "a little bit" of green get rid of looking almost "like" black shades of blue not "shadows" some yellow, not "a little" yellow the castle colors are mostly different shades of blue"." However... the building was slowly "elevating into the sky" would not "could" the lord came out of his office and said"," "..... At the end of the quote saying "our journey will be long" there is an extra period that should be removed After these words he told them a long story about the strange earthquake"." In this story, he explained how the huge balloon carried them and exactly where it was taking them."

It was a dark summer night in a city just outside of Boston. A boy named Tim (7 years old) and a girl named Kate (6 years old) are out of the house when they are not supposed to be. The city is quiet. The moon is brightly shining down on them, exposing a shadow the size of a large monster. Tim is wearing blue pants and a blue shirt while Kate is wearing brown pants with a green shirt. Nobody else is out walking in the city except them. Tim and Kate contemplated sneaking out of their house and walking around Boston. Kate didn't think it was a good idea to go, but Tim was able to convince her. They sneak out the back window of their house, without getting caught by their parents, and run out of sight. Once they catch their breath, the realize the city is dead silent. This was something they had never experienced before. The two of them tiptoed down the sidewalk as they didn't want to wake up anyone else living in the city. There wasn't a single star in the sky. When the tw...

It was a dark summer night in a city. A boy and a girl are out of the house when they are not supposed to be. Behind them is a shadow the size of a large monster. The city is quiet. The moon is shining down brightly down on them, exposing a shadow the size of a large monster. The boy is wearing blue pants and a blue shirt while the girl is wearing brown pants with a green shirt. Nobody else is out walking in the city except them. Tim and Kate contemplated sneaking out of their house and walking around the city.Kate didn't think it was a good idea to go, but Tim was able to convince her.They sneak out the back window, without getting caught by their parents, and run out of sight. Once they catch their breath, the realize the city is dead silent. This was something they had never experienced before. The two of them tiptoed down the sidewalk as they didn't want to wake up any other families. There wasn't a single star in the sky. Although, it was a full moon that night. The m...

1) I skated at the ice skating rink 2) I ate lots of food 3) I traveled to Florida and Rhode Island 4) I ran almost everyday 5) I swam in the pool 6) I slept all the time 7) I fished down in Florida 8) I laughed with my friends 9) I listened to a lot of music 10) I celebrated Christmas and New Years It is night time, and there are two children walking together, but they are casting a shadow of a large monster The two children snuck out of the house when they weren't supposed to The large monster pops out and eats the two kids moonlight creating shadow boy girl shadow monster nighttime blue black green brown walking silence holding hands summer