1/14 In Class Writing


I would get rid of "light tiny" when it says "light tiny castle because a castle isn't light or small

Shades of blue instead of "shadows of blue"

Use a semicolon instead of "-" in both paragraphs

Get rid of "a little bit" of green

get rid of looking almost "like" black

shades of blue not "shadows"

some yellow, not "a little" yellow

the castle colors are mostly different shades of blue"." However...

the building was slowly "elevating into the sky"

would not "could"

the lord came out of his office and said"," ".....

At the end of the quote saying "our journey will be long" there is an extra period that should be removed

After these words he told them a long story about the strange earthquake"." In this story, he explained how the huge balloon carried them and exactly where it was taking them."

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